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Her head dress'd with thought by ~BorderlineOptimist:iconBorderlineOptimist:



Her head dress'd with thought, like uncurling smoke,
Or hands shiv'ring 'neath a gown's guilding folds,
Such hands! As fierce, or as tender as Gould's
Unable to shift the bind of thy yoke.
Apollo knows less of barren desire,
Striking a chord: on swift bow or sweet lyre.
Kneeling t'wards Nature, t'wards laurel and oak
Limbs asway, conducting proverbial winds,
The Raptures! The Sins!  To repent, amend!
Ah, this Love!  What then, Ferocity spoke
Unto the young mind, caught in Rhythm's time,
By winged Music!  Soars Triumph and Rhyme!

If she not, moved by visions of Song,
Wicked, Thou Innocence, Plague of all wrong!
©2008-2009 ~BorderlineOptimist
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Author's Comments

Kind of hesitant about this one, not sure I like it, or what it's even about.

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:icongreenemegan:
I love the opening. The idea loses me hear and there, but I'm a little too obtuse for poetry anyway. I especially like "Apollo...lyre".
:iconborderlineoptimist:
Yeah, this one's all over the place i'd probably have trouble explaining it myself, glad you like it though.

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It's Salvation that you want.

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